[ ♆ ] Your personality section appears to be mixed with your history section. Large swathes of Wangji's personality section have very little to do with his personality, and need to be allocated to the history section instead.

[ ♆ ] Additionally, we would like to alert you to the probability that most, if not all, of Wangji's abilities as they pertain to spirits will be nerfed entirely upon entry to LifeAftr, as most of them seem to rely on extant spirits or malevolent forces that exist in the vicinity. Simply put, on a normal day, LifeAftr does not have any of those entities within it. Attempting to summon, control, or otherwise speak to ghosts will prove useless. This would affect Wangji's abilities of cultivation, spirit communication, language of Qin, evocation, inquiry, rest, and any spiritual uses of his chord assassination skill. This would also render his mediumship fairly useless, again simply as a consequence of the setting. We wanted to ensure that this would be something you would be amenable to, as LifeAftr simply does not contain the spirits necessary to fulfill any of these acts.

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